Revised Thesis Statement
The trials and tribulations of Galileo are often considered both predicative of the future of Western Civilization, as well as a perfect encapsulation of the context of his own time, because even though he was limited in materials; such as wood, string, and metal; tools, like a telescope of his own invention that did not work very well; and he was not allowed to share some of his beliefs: for example his belief in heliocentricism; his ideas and inventions helped change the lives of the people around him and basically started the scientific revolution, which has led humanity to where it is today.
Read back through this and honestly tell me if you can understand what your argument is.
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