This is good so far. I would add more direct quotes, but good use of citations. I like your use of primary source citations throughout your paragraphs. I see your argument in certain parts of your paper, but I feel like you should still make your paper a little less descriptive and your argument more evident.
This is good so far. I would add more direct quotes, but good use of citations. I like your use of primary source citations throughout your paragraphs. I see your argument in certain parts of your paper, but I feel like you should still make your paper a little less descriptive and your argument more evident.
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