This is really good Mary!! :DD I understood everything that you talked about and it all made sense. There is a lot of good info :] In the second paragraph, I'm just wondering because I am not entirely sure, but are we supposed to have an entire paragraph defining terms? I really don't know. Also, this sentence in the second paragraph: "The Nazi Part was a fascist group." I was thinking you meant Nazi party... maybe not, but i just didn't want you to miss that little spelling thing when you turned it in haha xD Other than that.... it was really good! I really dont know what else to correct... good job! :]
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ReplyDeleteThis is really good Mary!! :DD I understood everything that you talked about and it all made sense. There is a lot of good info :]
ReplyDeleteIn the second paragraph, I'm just wondering because I am not entirely sure, but are we supposed to have an entire paragraph defining terms? I really don't know.
Also, this sentence in the second paragraph: "The Nazi Part was a fascist group." I was thinking you meant Nazi party... maybe not, but i just didn't want you to miss that little spelling thing when you turned it in haha xD
Other than that.... it was really good! I really dont know what else to correct... good job! :]